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Error identification "Talk" is not the main verb in this sentence. It's fine to skip it. The main one is "attract". I have not found any request to keep the word "talk". Re-writing sentences does mean: - Express the idea in the originals one by alternative ways - Re-phase the
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Error identification "Talk" is not an appropriate word in this content!!!!--> The article about the true story of an old pensioner attrached a lot of readersMore about tell/speak/talk/say: http://speakspeak.com/english-grammar-exercises/intermediate/tell-say-speak-talk-differ
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